In response to your peers, offer what growth areas and strengths you share with your classmates as
well as any strategies that you have used to address potential issues.
1 What are your three weakest areas so far in the writing process and how are you going to improve
them over this week?
This has been very overwhelming for me. It seems impossible. I haven’t even completed my first
draft yet. I started late and then didn’t do it right so I’m on the third try. I’m not feeling confident
about any of it.
I plan to stop pressuring myself so much. Then, maybe I can think about what I need to think about,
instead of nothing. I can’t think about and thing besides not being able to do this paper correctly.
I wish you all good luck with your papers
2. To be completely honest, I’m uncertain about my three weakest areas, but I do recognize that I
could have improved on the literature review section of our paper last week. It wasn’t my first time
writing a literature review, yet it seems I lost my edge slightly. I’m more accustomed to writing
annotated bibliographies, which are technically similar but include more detailed information and
research from the sources used, rather than just a brief summary. However, I am aware that with my
topic of struggles in low-income communities, there are numerous issues to address, and I need to
pinpoint the specific focus. For my part, I chose to concentrate on redlining because it
encapsulates all the various struggles within one overarching term.
